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托福獨立寫作  高分範文 (十一)

同樣的意見也有不同的表達方式，但是就下面兩篇來說，開頭都是以托福寫作的問題為開頭，但是如果要用問題做為自己的寫作的開頭，最好要換句話說，不要整句話就擷取來用，這是托福寫作中最忌諱的，因為托福本身最重視的就是考生對於字句的操控和熟悉度，所以在托福寫作中其中之一的關鍵就是同義字的替換。

TASK: Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and　examples to support your choice.

第一篇

  Some people prefer to get up early in the morning to start the day's work; while other people like to get up later in the day to work until late at night. Which option do you prefer? I would choose to get up early in the morning. This view is based on the follwing reasons.

　　By getting up early in the morning you can enjoy a lot of good things that nature offers. You can breath fresh air, smell aroma of flowers, listen the birds singing in the morning. What a beatiful world! In the meantime, these can refresh our brains and quickly get ready for the day's work. We can immediately concentrate in the work, and solve the problems with great efficiency. For example, when I was in senior middle school, I got up early in the morning everyday to go over my lessons and prepare the courses that I would have that day. I found it was so efficient and I memorized my study material so deeply. On the contrary, people who get up late and go to bed late tend to leave all the day's work to the night, and tend to go to bed until the finish the day's work. This is not a good living habit and also not an efficiently way of working.

　　Anotherreason why I would like to get up early to start a day's work is because I believe that it is good for our health. The body's cycle follows the nature: when the sun rise, it is time to get up; when the moon rise, it is time to go to bed. Besides, by getting up early we can have time to do some excercises such as jogging, hiking and swimming, which will benifit our health. Many statistics show that most people who live a long life get up early and go to bed early. While getting up late and go to bed late violates human biology and therefore will do harm to the health. And peopel who get up late never got a chance to do morning excercises.

　　In a word, getting up early in the morning to start a day's work is a smart choice for people, it can benifit both people's work and health.

第二篇

  Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others, however, prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. As far as I am concerned, getting up early is a good habit because it is good for health and is easy to take care of everyday works.　In the first place, everyone knows that getting up early is a very good habit for our health. You can enjoy the fresh air in the early morning, and also you can get a good night sleep during the quiet midnight time. Moreover, if you get up early, before go to work, you still have enough time to do some exercises, such as walking, running and riding the bike. Without doubt, all of the　exercises do help your health.

　　In the second place, it is a little bit easy to take care of everyday works if people get up early. For example, if everyone in the family gets up early, wife will have enough time to prepare the　breakfast for the whole family, children will have enough time to catch the school bus, husband　will never forget to change his dirty shirt. Everything is on the order.

　　Admittedly, some people who work until midnight and get up later in the day claim that working in the midnight is more efficient and can concentrate the work without distraction. However, the advantages of getting up early carry more weight than those of getting up later.

　　To sum up, from what I have discussed above, we can safely draw a conclusion that getting up early can benefit not only because it is good for ours health but also it is easy for us to take care of　everyday works. Therefore, I prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work.