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托福獨立寫作  高分範文 (七)

由內容可以得知，比較第一篇和第二篇用字與內容上，其實不難發現兩篇用字上和內容表達上的差距，其實這是一個歷程，第一篇就比較像是前期，因為一開始在字彙和文法不足的前提下，能想到以及表達的都很有限，也無法想到很多同義字句來換句話說，這是需要日積月累的閱讀和學習才有可能提升的一種基本功。

TASK：  Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice? Give reason for answer.

第一篇內容：

  As knowledge and experience serve as twin towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for finial fulfillment, either to rack his brain, just like what happened to Newton, sitting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for other’s wisdom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjamin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown library. Both way work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjamin Franklin may best be regarded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out of be the prime alternative.

  Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from other’s advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and efficiency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is , more often than not, far less shining compared with group’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of pass great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corporation is highly emphasized in the 21 century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individual involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, pr even the entire global village.

  Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, practicality and personalities of each other. 

  Admittedly turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F. Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.     

第二篇內容：

People face all kinds of difficulties and problems in their daily lives. Most of the time, I prefer to resolve my problems based on my own experience and knowledge instead of consulting others for solutions. There are plenty of reasons behind this; for example, I can always solve problems by myself, and that way I do not bother others, am more efficient and can make better decisions.

Solving problems individually doesn’t bother others. If a person asks me for advice overly frequently, I would feel really annoyed. In addition, some tasks require people to solve problems by themselves instead of asking others for help, such as when students are having an exam at school. Therefore, in order to prepare for those individual tasks, people should try to be independent while solving their daily problems. However, the advantages of settling a matter on one’s own do not end here.

People can solve problems more efficiently if they they can do it on their own. People have to explain the issues that they have faced to every single person that they are trying to get the advice from. That’s time consuming. Also, different advisors might give the asker different advice. Thus, choosing an appropriate suggestion among them all would also be a complicated procedure. However, solving problems by themselves would be a much simpler process.

Last but not least, most of the time, resolving issues individually has the best chance of coming up with an appropriate solution. Every person knows themselves better than anyone else. When someone asks others for advice, advisors usually give their advice based on their personal experiences. Sometimes the advice might not applicable for the advice taker. Thus, it is best to make decisions on one’s own instead of trying to get someone else’s advice.

When we confront a problem, we should try to solve it by ourselves if we can. In this way, we will become independent, use time efficiently and find the best solutions for our issues. As we grow, we face more and more problems. Solving them without the help of others (help from others) is an important life skill we must all master.