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托福獨立寫作  高分範文 (一)

托福獨立寫作約莫都要300字，如果少於300字基本上除非考官覺得遣字用詞以及表達的內容很棒，否則一般來說最好還是達到托福考試要求的字數以上會比較好；但是也不能超過太多，因為太過冗長也未必會比較好。另外小提醒：盡可能不要套模板寫作，雖然英文寫作本來就有一定的架構，但是不能僅都依照模板用字，對於長年批改托福作文的考官其實很容易判斷考生是否是運用模板而沒有自己的英文寫作能力的。

下面這篇文章字數雖然不算多，但是基本上對於自己的論點都有很明確的解釋，並且也都有舉例說明，用字上也都不會過於簡單，也都有運用換句話說的方式來解說自己的論點。

TASK： It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

範文:

  Entertainment is an important part of everyone’s life. We all need to take time to relax insgroupsto live healthy lives and do our work efficiently. It is easier to relax when an appropriate form of entertainment is convenient and close by. Therefore, I would support a proposal to build a new movie theater in my neighborhood.  

單字

1) Entertainment (N.)  娛樂，娛樂節目；娛樂表演

2) insgroupsto 其實並沒有這個單字，就網路上的資料意思為 in order to 

3) efficiently (Adv.) 有效地

4) appropriate (Adj. / V.) 恰當的；合適的； 挪用；佔用；盜用；侵吞； 撥出（款項）

5) proposal  (N.) 建議；計劃；提案

  Entertainment places can bring some disadvantages to a community such as increased traffic and noise, but I believe the advantages of a new movie theater would outweigh these concerns. For one thing, the people in my neighborhood would save time. When they wanted to see a movie they could simply walk to the new theater rather than spend time traveling by bus or car. In addition, it would be safer for children to visit a nearby movie theater rather than one in some other part of the city. And finally, a new theater might attract other businesses, such as restaurants and coffee shops, where the people of my neighborhood could go to relax.    

單字

1) disadvantage  (N. / V.) 劣勢，不利因素 ； 使處於劣勢，使處於不利地位

2) community (N.)  社區；群體；社團，團體，界

3) traffic  (N. / V.) 交通流量； 運輸量； 非法交易

4) outweigh  (V.)  比…更重要；重於；大於

  In short, a new movie theater in the neighborhood would increase the number of entertainment options for the residents. They could enjoy themselves more easily without spending a lot of time traveling to another part of the city. For these reasons I would support the building of a movie theater in my neighborhood.

單字

1) In short  簡而言之，總之

2) resident  (N. /Adj.) 居民；住戶 ； （美國的）高級專科住院實習醫生 居住的；定居的；居留的； （有特殊技能或品質者）常駐的